Actually, no one else has written a full fic just about Kirk and Tarsus, now that I look through my delicious. I've definitely seen it referenced briefly amidst the rest of Kirk's angst, because otherwise I would have no idea what it is. But I really could have sworn I read some others about it, and now I can't find it. Dammit, clearly I imagined all of the Tarsus-related angst. Or I didn't bookmark it.

Anyway, I do think it could stand to be fleshed out more. The five things (or more) format lends itself well to those times when you don't necessarily want or need more to fill up the spaces in the story, so I think it's fine as is. It could be longer and less five things-y and still be awesome though.